英语学习一定是
先输入再输出
的过程。输入不够，输出就会出现问题。当然在费脑的程度上 ，输出总是大于输入，即：说和写比 听和读 难。虽然说，输入多自然会带动输出，但现实中，输出水平只能带动出一部分输入，那要怎么带动得更多呢？简言之就是怎么提高口语和写作能力呢？两个路径即
刻意练习
+加大输入
。当有一定的输入量后开始刻意练习输出，就是刻意进行口语和写作训练，然后暴露问题和不足，接着纠正错误，弥补不足，之后再次输入，再次输出......如此反复，英语的总体水平自然会逐步提高。一条完整的学习链条应该是这样循环的
输入---输出---暴露错误---纠正错误+弥补知识漏洞---输入---输出
今天我们来进行一个关键的环节即暴露错误，纠正错误，通过解剖同学们的作文病句来学习英语句子的正确表达方法。
第一篇：
原句：On one hand, we studying may not become rich, but it can have more knowledge.
学习者想表达：一方面来看，学习可能不会使我们富有，但它能给我们带来很多知识。
本句问题：汉语水平制约英语表达。变得富有，有更多的知识的主语都并不是“学习”而应该是“我”或“我们”
改为：On onehand, studying may not
make us
become rich, but it canbring us
more knowledge.第二篇：
原句：Along with the development of society, it is a common phenomenon that colleges are highly attatch significance to their future.
本句问题：句型用错
along with
表示 “与...一道”，with
表示“随着”，另外be 和动词原形 绝不连用，attatch great significance / importance to...表示 认为...很重要，重视。同时此句
句意牵强：随着社会的发展，大学生很重视他们的未来成为一个普遍现象。
改为：
With
the development of society, it is a commonphenomenon that
college studetns still attach great
significance to
their further studies after graduation.
译为：随着社会的发展，大学生在毕业后仍很重视进修学习成为一个普遍现象。
第三篇：
原句：It is true that an increasing number of college students' doing part-time jobs, which has provoked the widespread concern among college students.
学习者想表达：在现代社会，随着社会的发展，有越来越多的大学生会去做兼职工作，这引起了大学生们的广泛关注。
问题：英语语法知识运用错误。that引导主语从句，句子没有谓语。
改为：it is true that an increasig number of college students
are
doing part- time jobs...第四篇
原句：Some of people want to independent as soon as possible to living themselves. On the contrary, many of people want to pursing further studies in order that their education has improved and take more chance for work.
学习者想表达：一些人想要独立靠自己生活，相反，很多人想追求深度学习这样他们的教育水平就会提高进而会有更多的工作机会。
问题：基础知识不扎实，短语搭配有较多错误。want to 后应跟动词原形。
目的应用 to do，many people，some people 中间没有of，教育应该是被提高等。
改为：
Some people want tobe independent
as soon as possible tolive by
themselves. On the contrary,many people
wantto pursue
further studies in order that their educationcan be improved
and they can get more chance to work.第五篇
原句：Researchers show that some people finding a job as soon as from graduated because they has found suitable works for themselves.
学习者想表达：研究表明一些人一毕业就能找到工作因为那份工作就是最适合他们的工作。
问题：语法知识零碎混乱。show that 与后面的不需要逗号，从句部分谓语用动词原形，as soon as 后面应该接句子。
改为：Researchers show that some people
can find
jobs as soon asthey graduate from
colleges, becausethe jobs offered are the most suitable ones for them.
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写作比起阅读自然要更加费脑，但唯有写作，才能使输入的内容完全内化吸收，而且输出又会反过来倒逼输入，形成学习的良性循环。英语造句练习，作文练习都是学习中一个很关键的环节。在写作中不断暴露问题，问题才有机会被修正，无咎无誉也就无成长。
Reading makes a full man,conference a ready man,and writing an exact
man. --Francis Bacon
读书使人充实，讨论使人机敏，写作使人精确。 ~培根
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